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曾经有同学问:"模板的数量是不是太少了?"跨考教育英语名师回答:"模板的数量越少越好。"同学又问:"那和别人写重了怎么办?"名师答:"咱们还有一个绝招没有用,那就是句子结构的润色和修饰。"下面跨考教育来谈一谈阐述段的句子写法,供大家参考。
阐述段的句子润色和修饰方法一:修饰主系表中的is
如果只写it is名词,句子的结构就比较单调,如果我们把is的写法替换为一些被动结构,效果也不一样,具体的方法如下:1)It is nothing but名词2)It has been well received as形容词的最高级名词3)It has been commonly accepted as one of形容词最高级名词s4)It is considered名词5)It can be regarded as名词6)It can be seen as名词以上其中句子结构,选取任何一种,解决it is名词,结构简单,字数过少的问题。其中It is nothing more than和It is nothing but可以用于语气的增强,后面五种写法可以让主系表呈现出书面风格。我们可以通过对比,看一看写作的效果。比如你想表达"英特网是一种娱乐方式"这个意思,如果不会使用句子结构,就只能写成It is a form of entertainment。但是如果选用上述句子结构,就可以分别写成It is nothing but a major means of entertainment.或者Internet has been well received as the most popular means of entertainment,或者Internet has been commonly accepted as one of the most popular forms of entertainments。大家可以对比一下,这几个写法,是不是比it is a form of entertainment更像书面表达呢?
方法二:主谓宾,thus (let alone) doing and doing句型
除了主系表以外,英语中出出现得最多的就是主谓宾结构了,这种结构在写作时的难点在于,如果是一个动词还比较好安排,但是如果出现两个三个动词,就只能写多个短句,然后中间安插关联词。那么能不能少写几个短句,少安插几个关联词呢?办法之一就是把一个动词安排成谓语结构,把另外两个动词安排成现在分词做伴随状况。具体形式如下:名词第一个动词名词,thus doing and doing这样写,就把三个动词由平行状态变成一个谓语,两个分词伴随状态。关联词中如果想表达"因此",就把thus安插在doing的前边。只要你写得出三个短句,合并起来就是一个长句。比如写2002年"民族文化,世界文化"的时候,如果你想表达"中国文化可以促进国与国之间的彼此了解,增进友好关系,经济文化交流。"如果没有以上的句子结构,就只能这么写: Chinese culture can promote mutual understanding between countries, enhancing friendly ties and push forward economic and cultural exchanges.不能说这么写这不对,反正三个谓语动词平行摆放,看不出句子结构的变化。可是加上关联词又很麻烦:Chinese culture can promote mutual understanding between countries. In this way, it can enhance friendly ties and push forward economic and cultural exchanges.如果用上述句型写就成了:Chinese culture can promote mutual understanding between countries, thus enhancing friendly ties between them and pushing forward economic and cultural exchanges.最后一种方法谓语动词、现在分词并用,出现一些结构上变化,比单句加关联词的写法更简单一些。再比如写2007年"自信"的时候,如果你想表达"有自信的人能够融入社会、创造财富、开创事业"这个意思的时候,就可以写成:A confident man can fit into a competitive society, thus accumulating his wealth and establishing his career.这个句型还有一个否定的变形,那就是名词cannot动词名词,let alone doing and doing,这里的cannot和let alone是联用的,可以表达"不能实现...就更不用说实现...了。"比如还是2007年"信心"这篇文章,如果你想表达"表达不自信的人就很难融入竞争型社会,也不能创造财富、开创事业了"。想不到上述句子结构的同学就只能写成:A less confident person cannot fit into a competitive society. He cannot accumulate wealth. And he cannot establish his career.这个地方否定词not用得多,显得罗嗦,就不如用A less confident person cannot fit into a competitive society, let alone accumulating his wealth and establishing his career.这样cannot和let alone配合在一起,只用一个not就可以,不用每个句子都写not了。